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I really appreciate the proposers' commitment to building a Nouns musical, especially the care they are taking to ensure the story and characters stay true to Nouns' spirit. I think this project has the potential to reach a wide audience and would be a great addition to the Nouns ecosystem. I also like the idea of using the community's feedback to help shape the project going forward. I'm excited to see how this unfolds.

I am concerned that this proposal is trying to do too much at once. It may be more helpful to focus on a specific aspect of the production first. For example, the proposal could be for funding to complete a full album. I would love to see more detail on the specific plan and the timeline for each phase of the musical.

This is a strong proposal with well-defined objectives. The authors have shown dedication to Nouns values in the past and are using their expertise to create a new Nounish story that can reach a wide audience.

I think it could be improved by breaking the proposal into smaller parts. This allows the community to easily digest the proposal and understand the value provided for each step of the project. Also, by releasing the music independently, it could be more widely adopted and have the potential to reach a larger audience.

Although the Nouns Musical has a compelling storyline and interesting characters, the proposed scope is too broad and is not an efficient use of community resources. It should focus on a more defined goal, perhaps the creation of a pilot episode and a marketing campaign that more effectively utilizes the existing Nouns community, as a means to prove its concept before advancing further.

This proposal is a great opportunity to expand Nouns into a new form of art with a wide range of possibilities. The script and music can also be released to the public under a CC0 license and further contribute to the spread of the Nouns ecosystem. However, I would suggest adding a milestone related to working with Miranda Cornell to the timeline and provide a more detailed budget for the second phase of the project, outlining the cost of production, personnel, and recording.

While I like the concept, I find the synopsis vague and the team's experience in the space insufficient. The plan needs to be more comprehensive.

The detailed plan and the background of the proposers instills confidence that this project would be well executed and benefit Nouns.

The idea of this musical is not a bad one, but the proposers have not yet created a concept that is convincing enough to warrant a large budget. They have only been writing for six months and need to prove to the community that they have the skills and experience to deliver. This proposal would benefit from having a completed demo or a small production run of the musical.

The current proposal lacks details and clarity on the plan to reach a large audience. The focus is too heavy on internal work and not enough on reaching outside the Nouns community.

While I admire the proposers' ambition and enthusiasm, I find the synopsis of the story vague, making it difficult to evaluate the project's potential impact. For me, the proposal should detail how this story will truly resonate with the Nouns community in a way that can be easily shared and understood by both existing members and those outside of the ecosystem.

The proposal's budget feels too large, especially given the uncertainty around the project's impact. I would love to see a more detailed budget and how this project will connect with other existing Nouns projects

I am confident that the proposers will bring their dedication and experience to this project and will continue to champion Nouns values with their work.

I'm not in love with the musical synopsis. There is no compelling reason for the characters to travel back in time and the story feels overly derivative. The project could benefit from a more detailed breakdown of its production phases and budget allocation. The tone of the proposal is also overly self-congratulatory.

This proposal does not seem to align with Nouns’ current approach to funding, as it is largely focused on external events and activities.

This musical has a compelling storyline, great potential to grow the Nouns brand, and the authors' experience makes me confident in their abilities.

While this is a cool idea, a musical is a big undertaking, and I’d rather see a smaller project such as a short film, or a series of videos, focusing on just one or two of the characters, rather than an entire production. I'm not sure this is a project that will make Nouns proud.

The proposal is too ambitious for this stage. I’d prefer to see a smaller and more focused effort. With the right team, it could be possible to develop a smaller version of the concept, perhaps just a song or two. I’m excited to see the full scope of the proposal if it proves successful, and I’m a big fan of music. But I’m not comfortable supporting this right now.

I think this proposal would be better suited for a smaller budget, possibly with a more concise focus on the script. I'm not convinced that it would be impactful to fund a musical at this stage. I am also a little concerned about the budget allocation.

I love the idea, but I’m not sure that this specific proposal is the best way to bring it to life. Would love to see more community engagement. Also, how will we ensure this musical is widely accessible?

The proposers have been working on the project for the past eight months already, and the proposal could benefit from clearer project milestones to help guide future development and provide a roadmap for delivering value to the Nouns community.

While the music sounds good, I'm not sure a musical is the best way to proliferate Nouns. This could be improved by building a Nouns art gallery or showcasing Nouns artwork at existing galleries.

I love the idea of pushing the boundaries of art and the team has proven their dedication to bringing the Nouns brand into new spaces. The narrative of the musical also has the potential to reach a wide audience.

I think the musical's synopsis is well-written, but I need a clearer explanation of how this musical will impact the broader community beyond the Nouns ecosystem.

The story is not yet compelling and the production details feel like a lot of promises without concrete evidence to warrant such a large funding request. I would be more inclined to vote FOR if the budget was reduced and there was a public demo or alpha of the project.

I appreciate your work and experience but would prefer a more tangible demonstration of what the final product might look like before investing in such a large project.

While I appreciate the enthusiasm behind this proposal, I believe there are areas that could be improved. I would encourage the team to develop a more concrete plan for production, focusing on specific milestones and a clear timeline for the next stage. I am also concerned about the potential for duplication of effort in the proposed project and would like to see more evidence of how this musical would be unique and contribute to the Nouns ecosystem.

I think it's wise to focus on a singular, high-quality musical in order to attract a broader audience. It might be better to focus on a single stage production in a particular city with more detailed plans than the current proposal.

While I'm intrigued by this concept, I think the narrative needs to be more relevant to Nouns. The project should lean into the community's shared history and how it has affected the world.

This feels like a bold concept, but I am concerned that the proposal lacks a concrete plan. It would be helpful to see a more detailed roadmap outlining specific milestones and timelines to demonstrate progress and build trust with the community. Additionally, we need to be cautious about placing bets on projects that don't have a clearly defined trajectory for a return on our investment, even if they have the potential to be successful. We need to prioritize projects that have a defined return on investment.

Although this project sounds promising, it needs to show more progress, such as a completed script or a music sample, before I can vote FOR.

This proposal showcases the potential for Nouns to go beyond its core function and reach a wider audience, I believe that the proposers have the experience needed to deliver a high-quality musical, and I’m confident that they will make the Nouns community proud.

The proposal's lack of details surrounding the final production process and the overall budget make it difficult to judge if the budget is realistic. It could be improved by providing more detail about the budget allocation to the various production phases, and how the funds will be used to support the final stage production.

This project stands apart with its ambitious goals. It is heartening to see such creative endeavors within the Nouns community, and I am hopeful that they can make it a reality.

The proposal seems to offer a compelling narrative with clear goals. However, the timeframe for completion seems ambitious and not in line with the realistic timeline of a musical production. Focus on more achievable goals in the short term.

This proposal is a good fit for the Nouns community, as it aligns with the values of creativity, community, and collaboration. The project's goal of creating a musical based on Nouns lore has the potential to resonate with a wider audience, and I am confident that the proposers will deliver a quality production.

I applaud Jeff and Max for their commitment and experience. This proposal provides a clear pathway to making this musical a reality and showcases a shared vision for the Nouns community. It's time to take a leap of faith and see where this journey leads.

While the concept is creative and has potential, the narrative is not a strong selling point for an audience outside of the Nouns community. The proposed marketing plan lacks details about specific targets and how it will generate interest. More focus on developing a relatable narrative and a comprehensive marketing plan could improve the proposal.

This proposal could benefit from additional clarity around the production timeline. We should break down the production phases and deliverables for each stage, especially for the initial script development.

This proposal demonstrates a strong commitment to the Nouns community and has the potential to expand the Nouns brand through creative storytelling and impactful production. It's exciting to see this project moving forward.

I'm not sure if this project is aligned with the Nouns' vision. It's not clear how this musical would benefit the community and the story sounds a little uninspired. The project would need to clearly define its goals and how it will showcase the Nouns brand and the values of the community.

There is a lack of engagement with the community. The production team seems to have made a lot of promises, but there is not much proof of how these promises will be delivered.

The concept of a Nouns musical is a bold and exciting idea. It has the potential to capture the imagination of the community and bring Nouns to a wider audience. The proposers' past experience in the music industry makes me believe they have the talent to create a truly impactful work.

This musical sounds like a high-quality, original creation that can help grow Nouns beyond its current audience by reaching those who may not even be familiar with the broader space.