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I appreciate the thoughtful process taken to iterate on this prop. The story is engaging, and I believe that the team has the right experience to bring this vision to life. It feels like this prop has the potential to bring joy and meaningful connection for audiences across generations.

I’m still not convinced this is a good idea for Nouns, and would like to see more focus on the overall impact of this initiative, as well as a stronger sense of community participation. The proposal highlights the artists’ skillset and experience, but doesn’t include any evidence of existing traction or a clear road map for community engagement.

It's an interesting idea and I am a supporter of art and creative expression in general. The proposal doesn't seem quite clear enough, with the focus being on creating an immersive experience. It might be helpful to offer more details on how this project will directly benefit the Nouns community.

While I enjoy this project's ambition and its potential for success, I think it needs to be broken down into smaller chunks with more concrete deliverables for each phase before it can pass.

This proposal focuses on a concept that is too broad and does not provide specific ways to connect the community with the musical in a meaningful way. The project could be improved by providing clear, tangible deliverables that directly engage the Nouns ecosystem, such as a series of mintable songs with NFT rewards. This could inspire wider participation from community members and create more lasting value.

The proposal lacks concrete details and timelines, I think that the budget is too high for this stage of development. We should have a better idea of where this is going and what the final deliverables will be before committing to the project.

This prop needs more concrete detail regarding how it will impact Nouns beyond a single show, and who will manage that impact in a sustainable way.

The synopsis of the musical sounds like a fun concept but lacks strong Nouns integration. Also, the proposal doesn't provide enough detail regarding the play's potential to reach a wider audience. I would like to see the proposal include a visual representation of the play's potential to attract and engage more people.

The proposal lacks detail about how this specific musical will be different from a traditional musical. What makes this Nouns-specific? The summary of the musical is vague, and it seems like this musical could be performed by any theatrical group, so I'm not sure what the community value is here.

The lack of a script and clear timeline makes this a very difficult proposal to judge. The community needs to be able to evaluate tangible progress. An outline of the show's structure and song list would be a good first step to gain community confidence.

I understand the passion and creative vision behind the musical, but the proposal lacks a clear path to community engagement and lacks any tangible connection to the broader Nouns ecosystem.

I'm very unsure about the production timeline. The initial proposal included a 3-step funding process, and it's concerning that the proposers are attempting to fast-track it. I would want to see a more realistic and clearly defined timeline that includes more milestones and deliverables, as well as incorporating the broader community into the development process. Additionally, I believe there needs to be a wider selection of people involved in producing the musical. It would be great to see more artists in the music and theatre sectors participating in the project.

This is an incredibly ambitious project. While it's a creative venture, it doesn't provide a clear pathway for the community to engage. It would be helpful if the proposal outlined specific actions for community involvement and contributions, which would allow for a more collaborative effort and a stronger connection to the Nouns ecosystem.

The concept and writing team are talented and the idea is nounish. However, there is not enough information about the production process. The musical will need to be fully produced and written before we see a return on this investment. Instead of a full $360k, I think the DAO should fund a smaller amount to produce a concept album with potential for broader distribution, and then revisit a full-scale production later.

I am excited by the potential of this project to become a truly groundbreaking piece of work for the Nouns ecosystem. The team has a strong background and a clear vision. I believe this project could reach a broad audience and bring even more recognition to Nouns.

The synopsis is interesting, but the proposal needs to be more specific about how this musical would be produced. It's not clear how these specific details will lead to more people learning about Nouns, given that a substantial portion of the requested funds would go to production costs.

The proposers have provided a detailed and impressive plan for creating a high-quality musical for the Nouns community. It's clear they have the experience and dedication to see this project through.

The scope of this proposal is too broad. A more concise and specific focus on the initial script development would be more appropriate, along with a transparent breakdown of the costs associated with each phase of the project. The proposal does a great job showcasing the proposers' experience and passion, which makes me more willing to engage in further discussions.

It's exciting to see what a nouns musical could be. I think this is a perfect opportunity to bring in more creators, musicians, and artists to the Nouns community. To help further solidify the impact of this proposal, I would recommend adding a section about marketing, outreach, and the potential for reaching a wider audience.

While I appreciate the proposers and their dedication to the project, I believe this proposal lacks a clear path to impact. The script should be written before seeking funding to assure the musical is actually good and has the potential to resonate with a broader audience. Also, we should not be funding the production of a musical before the script is finalized, which is a crucial step in any production.

A musical is definitely very ambitious and potentially very impactful, but I need to see a clearer articulation of the proposed story, and why it needs to be a musical rather than another form of media.

I don't think this is a good fit for Nouns at this time, and would like to see it resubmitted as a smaller, less complex project with clearer deliverables.

While this proposal is great, I believe that more details about the music, lyrics, and casting should be included. It would also be helpful to see more of the concept art and a full script. It would further bolster the proposal to include specific examples of how the team intends to generate interest and engagement.

I love the absurd & different. This proposal is highly creative and seems to have the potential to reach a large audience. If the creators can develop a more concise narrative explaining their vision for the project, I believe it could have an even greater impact on the community.

The authors are great and passionate, but there are still some crucial missing details. I would like to see a more detailed breakdown of the cost allocation per phase, as well as a concrete marketing plan, before I could approve this prop.

While this is a great concept, I want to see more of a plan to bring the musical to a larger audience. It sounds like the authors are more focused on a single production in New York but the impact could be much larger if they were to explore and activate at more locations.

The idea is very interesting and can potentially be impactful for the Nouns community. However, the proposal lacks a clear and actionable plan for how to execute the idea in a manner that is beneficial to the community.

It's a musical about the lore of a crypto project - it doesn’t really sound appealing to me. I'm also not a fan of large upfront budget requests. I would much rather see a smaller ask with a focus on creating shorter, more accessible content and making sure the project doesn't rely on any specific theater. For example, if they release a set of songs or short clips with a story, I’d be much more interested in seeing if they can grow an audience that enjoys it. It would also help to make the content more shareable to expand Nouns’ reach.

This is a very ambitious ask for a project that is still in its early stages. I'd like to see a more concrete plan with benchmarks to assess progress and clear steps for achieving long-term sustainability.

I love that the proposal is written with such a passion for the art and Nouns, this could be a truly special experience. The team has proven themselves over the years, and I trust them to bring this story to life.

This proposal lacks a concrete plan of execution for the final production and relies heavily on speculative future opportunities, like partnerships and potential investors. While the narrative is compelling, a stronger emphasis on achievable milestones and clear deadlines would increase the proposal's credibility.

While a musical about Nouns is a fun and interesting idea, the scope of the project is too large and the narrative feels unfocused. The proposal could be improved by breaking the musical down into smaller, more manageable components.

This is a bold, ambitious project that is aligned with the community's values and could be very impactful. It takes a leap of faith to fund a musical that is still in early development, but I believe in this team's ability to deliver.

I love the team and the concept. This is exactly what I was hoping to see in Nouns. I'm excited to see how this musical develops and I hope we can make it a big hit!

I'm for this proposal since it clearly outlines the steps to completion. The proposers have a clear vision for what they want to accomplish and seem to be willing to work hard to reach their goals.

The synopsis and song provided are nice. But it’s still not clear to me how the musical will be integrated with the Nouns community, or what exactly will be produced. These details should be outlined in a more explicit fashion to allow us to better understand the intended outcomes and how we can evaluate the project’s overall value.

I am supportive of the Nouns brand being used for creative endeavors. While the musical idea is unique, this prop feels rushed. It doesn't focus on the artistic and creative processes that make it a true Nouns project. The prop could be improved by incorporating more visual assets, highlighting how the musical embraces the community's values, and showcasing clear milestones for the project.

I'm extremely supportive of this prop and the concept of a Nouns musical in general. I'm excited by the possibility of introducing Nouns to entirely new audiences through a traditional art form.

While we appreciate the concept, we are unsure about the value it brings to the Nouns community. The proposal could be improved by highlighting how it will spread Nouns values or better connect the community to the project. Also, details on a distribution strategy would be helpful to demonstrate how the project could reach a wider audience.

This proposal is creative and showcases Nouns through a new medium. The authors have a strong track record and a clear vision for how the musical will progress. The proposal demonstrates a commitment to the community with a focus on transparency.

I'm not seeing the alignment with Nouns values in the way presented. The story is not clear enough to make a lasting impact on the DAO or in the world. To make this a better proposal, the proposers should provide a clear narrative explaining their plans and focus on the actual musical rather than the production details. They should also provide examples of how the content created will showcase Nouns to a wide audience, rather than just sharing generic music industry trivia.

I'm not entirely convinced that this musical will reach a wide enough audience to justify the requested funding and I am unsure if it will be a good representation of Nouns. It is an ambitious project that can contribute to spreading the influence of Nouns but needs some revisions to be a successful proposal. I think the musical could benefit from focusing on a more concise story, with a clear path for distribution, and less emphasis on the authors.

This proposal has potential, but it needs more specific information to be successful. The writers should flesh out the details of their production process and provide a timeline with specific deliverables.

I think this proposal could be a great addition to the Nouns ecosystem. However, the budget seems to be a bit heavy on marketing & production costs and I think it can be adjusted. I'm also not convinced on the need to hire an associate director from a Tony award-winning musical. Would prefer a smaller-scale team that is dedicated to the Nouns community.

This musical offers a unique and engaging way to share Nouns lore with a broader audience, especially through potential future adaptations like school productions.