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I’m a huge fan of Nouns supporting grassroot sports communities but I’m not sure that we need to put a full 13 ETH on the line for this event. The proposal could be improved by adding a more clear breakdown of cost to ensure that the ask is justified.

This prop sounds amazing but lacks the Nouns integration that I’m used to seeing. I’d like to see more detail on how the Nouns are used within the event and how Nouns will be represented. This could also be improved by including a Nouns-branded t-shirt or other giveaway that could be a popular item for attendees to wear after the event is over.

I'm voting against this proposal, mainly because I'm unsure how the proposed soccer field improvements will positively impact the Nouns brand. The proposal needs to better explain how this project can be "Nounified" with a clear and strong value prop.

While the project aims to help a community with a sloping field, the description lacks clarity on the intended outcome of the project. For example, the details about the location, team, and a precise breakdown of the 13 ETH budget could be further refined.

This proposal highlights a community’s need, however, I am hesitant to fund something that has no clear tie to Nouns or the wider Web3 space. The scope is broad, and the benefits to Nouns and the wider ecosystem are unclear. To increase the likelihood of success for the proposers, I suggest that the proposal include specific ways that Nouns or Web3 can be incorporated in the project.

I would be more confident in supporting this proposal if it focused more narrowly on the core concept of building a high-quality football field with a compelling Nouns theme. The scope could be refined by focusing on one area of the field, for example, to start, and then showcasing the results before expanding further.

This proposal would benefit the local community but the impact on Nouns is unclear. The proposal could be improved by providing details on how they will engage and onboard the community to Nouns while also clearly showcasing the connection between this soccer field and the Nouns ecosystem.

This proposal is too general and I'm not sure how this project would benefit Nouns. I would prefer to see a more specific project that focuses on a particular aspect of the soccer field repair.

This proposal is a great opportunity for Nouns to create positive social impact in Indonesia. It's exciting to see how the team plans to use the field for various community activities that go beyond just soccer.

The soccer field proposal is a commendable effort to improve community infrastructure, but the lack of a visual representation of the Noggle integration leaves me wanting. A simple illustration of the tribune or goal post design would make the proposal more compelling.

This is a good proposal that I’d be more confident voting for if it offered details about their community and team. The description is vague and lacks context. For example, what specific type of engineering work will be performed?

I appreciate the proposers' passion for soccer and community improvement, but I'm not convinced that this proposal aligns with Nouns goals. Instead of focusing on a specific event, they should explore how to integrate Nouns branding into the soccer field as a long-term effort. This would be a better investment for the Nouns DAO.

I appreciate the proposers commitment to community involvement and building infrastructure but this proposal is not a good fit for Nouns. This proposal is based on funding local projects and there is not enough connection with the Nouns brand or the broader community. I would be inclined to support this if a more specific Nouns theme could be provided to bring more engagement from the Nouns community. I would be interested in supporting this proposal once a clearer vision has been established to make this more than just a local project.

The proposal seems quite exciting but I'm not sure if this fits the vibe of the Nouns DAO. The project's focus is on providing better facilities for local soccer players. It's not clear how this directly benefits Nouns, even through its goals. It could be improved if it incorporates a more directly Nounish theme.

While the proposal does a good job of explaining the need for field improvement, it does not adequately describe how Nouns will be represented in the project. It would be beneficial to highlight how Nouns will be featured and how the team will promote the event and incorporate the community.

The proposal's clear focus on improving the community's soccer field, especially in a remote area, aligns with Nouns' values of supporting public goods. The plan for integrating Nouns and Noggles into the infrastructure will increase awareness and attract more people to the community.

This proposal is well-organized, has an engaging story and a clear plan for implementation. The images are especially impressive and help to visualize the impact.

This proposal is lacking in detail and clarity about how the funds will be used to actually make the field playable. It would be great to see a detailed breakdown of the work, including a timeline for completion, as well as a more compelling explanation of the long-term benefits of the project.

While I love this project and the team's passion, I’m a little concerned by the lack of clear information on the proposed budget allocation for each part of the project. I'd love to see a breakdown of the budget for the field work and team compensation to better understand how the funds would be utilized.

I appreciate the effort and enthusiasm in this prop but I think a better approach for Nouns would be to focus on creating a digital experience that showcases the event and the community. This could be done through an interactive online experience that captures the excitement of the tournament and allows people to explore the community.

While I like the goal of the project, there needs to be a clearer explanation of the actual impact of the proposed changes. Nouns, for example, is a bit ambiguous in the images provided. The proposal should include specific examples of how Nouns would be featured during the event, and what specific impacts Nouns will have on the community.

While this proposal highlights an area of real need, I would prefer to see the team elaborate on the impact to the community and provide a detailed breakdown of their plan for how Nouns will contribute to this soccer field improvement. The proposal also lacks any mention of how the soccer field can be used to attract new members to Nouns.

We’re always in support of ‘Doing Good’ projects, and this has great potential. However, the project seems to rely heavily on the physical aspects and the current proposal doesn’t provide a clear roadmap for how the events will continue after this first one. It would be helpful to know how the team intends to sustain the improvements made to the field. What are the future plans for this project? We love that this project is focusing on public goods, but it would be beneficial to outline how it can be self-sufficient with a plan that extends beyond just the first TourNOUNSment.

This proposal is full of great ideas and has a positive impact on the community. I think this proposal can be improved by focusing on the impact this project would have on Nouns. Consider how the proposal would bring the Nouns community together, and how the proposal would proliferate Nouns.

This proposal is a little too basic for me and doesn't provide enough information about how it will enhance Nouns brand recognition or impact the community.

I love seeing local communities around the world embrace Nouns. However, I'd prefer to see this proposal iterate to provide more opportunities for engagement from NounsDAO members and the broader community. I'd suggest including events that directly incorporate Nouns such as a Noggle hunt or a Nouns-themed skills competition. It's important that we take the time to carefully consider how we can use this funding to build a positive and long-lasting relationship with the community.

The proposed project sounds like a worthy cause and the proposed plan could result in positive externalities. However, I don't believe the request has enough details to justify the amount. The proposed plan includes no real representation of Nouns other than using it as a branding tool, and I am unsure if the team can successfully execute the project.

I have to be cautious about the requested funding given my past vote reason for a similar proposal. The project lacks a clear vision on how it will proliferate Nouns specifically. I would prefer to see a stronger focus on the long-term impact of this proposal, including specific details on how the project will continue to spread the Nouns message, and how the community can be more involved. For example, it could include plans for Nouns-themed events, a community competition, or ways to engage the local population.

I appreciate the ambition of this proposal and would love to see more engagement with Nouns in real life, but the proposal lacks a clear vision for how this event will be branded with Nouns and how it would attract people from outside the local community to participate.

I believe the proposal needs to highlight the benefits of the Nouns brand. The proposal should further detail how Nouns involvement benefits the local community and the potential for long-term impact beyond a single event.

The proposal is interesting, but it doesn't clearly explain how this event will be amplified to a global audience. The team could improve their proposal by explaining how they will use Nouns and Noggles to engage people outside of the Pasir Maju area.

The proposal is well-intentioned. However, I think it would be more impactful to focus on building a more sustainable solution, such as a permanent, fully functional soccer field, rather than a single event. It could also be a better idea to include a more diverse and inclusive list of individuals that the community can interact with.

This proposal is too vague and lacks a clear strategy for integrating Nouns. Also, it doesn't sufficiently explain how this event will benefit the community long-term. The team could improve this proposal by providing more details on the goals and a tangible path to sustainability.

I appreciate the effort and initiative in proposing this project, but it seems more geared towards a traditional, local, community-focused approach. I would be in favor of a more web3-focused approach, possibly incorporating Noggles into other aspects of the game, or even highlighting the unique challenges associated with creating an on-chain soccer game.

While I am a fan of the idea, I don't see how the Nouns could benefit from it in a lasting way. What is the community's role in the event besides providing funding? There is no mention of how the Nouns team, community, or members could be a part of the event. I think it would be better to find ways to integrate the Nouns team and community into the event and share more of their contributions.

The proposal is missing information regarding community involvement in design, construction, and overall participation. It's important for the community to be actively involved in the process, so they can understand the impact Nouns is having on the project and the community.

The proposal doesn't fully capture the potential of the local community to create content and engagement onchain. The focus should be shifted to a more collaborative approach with onchain engagement in mind rather than solely focusing on physical improvements to the field.

This proposal is very heartwarming, but I think it could be improved with more emphasis on how the project will impact the Nouns community and its mission.

The proposal is well-written and I appreciate the details provided but the requested funds are high. It would be beneficial for the project to break down how the funding will be spent on each aspect of the proposed improvements.

I have a lot of reservations about the scope of this proposal and it doesn't provide a clear vision of how it will integrate with the broader Nouns community.

The proposal lacks clarity on the design and implementation of Nouns branding, requiring further details on how the Noggles will be incorporated into the event and the surrounding area.

I appreciate the passion the team has for this project, but the proposal lacks detail on how the Nouns branding will be used. To improve the proposal, the team should list specific ways in which the branding will be used throughout the event.

The team has a proven track record of successfully executing projects that benefit their community. This proposal seems like a very natural fit with Nouns' values and I trust the proposers to deliver.

The TourNOUNSment is a great example of a project that will help improve the lives of the Pasir Maju community. I am confident that the team has the experience to deliver on their promises.